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What are you using, 3dstudio max? You need to work on the body movement alot, it looked kinda like they were floating around rather than walking. There were alot of intersecting polygons as well, gotta watch that! But all-in-all, looked nice, keep it up, and if you ever want to collab on a 3d game hit me up.
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thanks for the feedback and yes i am using 3dsmax, not ready to do a game yet but if i ever decide to i'll keep you in mind
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I'm not sure what I just saw, but I think I'm a little bit stupider now. I gave you a 5, hope to see this one stay in the portal, good job?
-badseed1
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I am
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I thought the artwork and animation was great. The story kinda bit though, it wasn't interesting, funny or dramatic at all. Try spending as much time as you did on the art, on the script. A couple of good jokes would have made this a 10, but once again, the plot lacked substance. The voices were alright. That too could be improved, but not too bad. I voted 4.
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Thanks for your comments.
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"Fuckin best pinball concept I've ever seen"
Alot of bugs though, which I'd imagine would be hard to get around in Flash. First off, the ball got stuck in alot ofplaces, mostly the right lower corner. I hit all the contraction things, and the contraction meter only filled up like 95% so it was impossible to get the contraction. The penises are to bold or need to change color, it's hard to see the ball when it rolls over them. Other than that, great job, a pinball game in Flash has gotta be hard work, 5/5.
-bs1
Author's Response:
Thanks. I agree there are bugs but I just could not eliminate all of them before this game had to go out. I do believe the progression of score / level works.
By the way the penises DO activate so look forward to that!
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One of the best stick submissions I've seen lately. To make it better, first fix the bug where the arrow moves back and forth with the guy. To do that, take the arrow movieClip out of the guys Movieclip, put it any where right off the stage. Then add the following code in the arrowMovieClip:
this._x=_root.guyMovieClip._x;
this._y=_root.copter._y;
I think that should do it, It seems like the rest of the code is good.
Also, If the arrowsstuck in the guys, that would be WAY cooler. But all-in-all I liked it.
Author's Response:
Thanks.
You misunderstand how this is working.
I made a terrible mistake in the game engine. Instead of the guy moving. Its the land that moves. And because i needed this done quickly for a contest, I wasn't able to fix the arrow problem. T_T
thanks
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There was a bug that when you went to shoot someone right in front of you, you would hit the arrow key and move on top of them instead. You should take out all the arrows where you can't even go. Why have an up arrow if you can't go up? Also it'd be nice to view the characters stats by mousing over them. I never knew what my opponents life was at until it was thier turn. All in all, you got a good start. I especially like the character creator. Good work. 4/5.
-badseed1
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Thanks
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I liked how you were able to rotate the objects, that's a good addition to dress-up. Also the changeable background was a nice touch. You coulduse some funnier items though, like a rubber dildo, or something along those lines. The funniest thing you can do with this is put a batman logo on him...
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ill see what i can think of for funny elements for that 3rd (if i make it) game.
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I'm not sure how 7 episodes already made it through the portal. I hope that the others were better, but based on this one, I'm not even going to waste the time watching the others. To improve it, you're goingto have to come up with a better joke. "find a good tree to lay on"? That's just not funny, the best part about this movie was the modified NG preloader. Seriously, think of something funnier. 1/5
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treez rule
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I rarely ever actually lol, but I did.
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lol
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